Mr. President, I ask to have printed in the Record finalist essays written by Vermont High School students as part of the Fourth Annual State of the Union Essay contest conducted by my office. These 7 finalists were selected from over 380…
Mr. President, I ask to have printed in the Record finalist essays written by Vermont High School students as part of the Fourth Annual State of the Union Essay contest conducted by my office. These 7 finalists were selected from over 380 entries.
The essays follow:
Raihan Kabir, South Burlington High School, Grade 12 (Finalist)
How a country collects and allocates its resources takes
precedence in outlining the foundation of equality and
general welfare. We as individuals rely on a revenue of both
incomes and loans, which makes for a crude economic model of
spending. This holds true for our government. As the nation
dives deeper into debt and countries around the world
experience protests and riots over austerity measures, it is
clear that additional tax dollars are necessary to reduce
debt, support society, and give rise to the economy.
Tax increases will put the definition of taxation back into
its actuality. The United States tax rates are theoretically
graduated by income level, meaning that lower income ranges
pay a lower rate than higher income ranges. However, those in
a higher tax bracket often have more deductions to further
equalize their effective rate with that of the middle or
lower brackets. A decline in tax rates for the most wealthy
is a disproportionate advantage for the already financially
capable members of our society, which further instigates the
income disparities that threaten our democratic ideals. The
top percent of Americans possesses more wealth than the
entire bottom 90 percent; the 400 wealthiest Americans have a
greater combined net worth than the entire bottom 150
million; and yet, everyone is paying a similar effective
rate. Not everyone is currently contributing their fair share
to society, and living in a nation with the largest amount of
debt in the world, this matter of fact is unacceptable. Tax
increases will make the theory of taxes a reality and restore
economic equality.
Though our current fiscal path is unstable, increasing
taxes will reduce national debt and put us on the right track
back to recovery. With a 16 trillion dollar debt that is
rising at the rate of 6 billion dollars a day (4 million
dollars every minute), every family in America would owe
about $50,000 to various countries around the world if the
burden trickled down to the general public. When the
government needs money, it sells treasury bills (similar to
savings bonds) to investors, who cash them in after an
average of ten years for the original amount plus interest.
Though a certain amount of debt is arguably helpful for the
economy, consistently high deficits force the government to
offer higher, more appealing interest rates; investors
eventually realize that the country is unlikely to pay back
the money it borrows and they stop lending, which crushes the
economy, as most recently witnessed in Greece. Our current
national debt is greater than the economies of the United
Kingdom, Australia, and China, combined. Stopping this
vicious economic cycle requires less foreign-reliance and
more self-sustenance, which is feasible if and only if we
increase taxes.
Tax increases will ensure the funding and availability of
certain social programs and necessary expenditures on
infrastructure without the need to excessively issue bonds.
Taxes currently fund public services of insurance, such as
Social Security and Medicare, of welfare, such as the Pell
Grant and Food Stamp programs, and of infrastructure, such as
the scholastic and interstate highway systems. Nobel laureate
of economics Paul Krugman affirms a current necessity for
increased taxes in his following statement:
[Regarding] proposals to raise the age of Medicare
eligibility to 67 . . . outlays would fall only by $125
billion over the next decade . . . and even when fully phased
in, this partial dismantling of Medicare would reduce the
deficit only about a third as much as could be achieved with
higher taxes on the very rich . . . don't believe anyone who
claims otherwise.
Taxes pay for important programs that go unpaid by spending
cuts. The Bureau of Economic Statistics reports that the
average standard of living, determined by comparing adjusted
incomes and poverty rates, has increased in years with a
higher annual budget and decreased in years on the contrary.
According to the New York Times and the Board of Economic
Advisors, there is a direct correlation between the amount of
money provided to the government in the national budget and
the quality of life in the United States, as determined by
the rate of poverty. This makes logical sense; our standard
of life escalates as we make fiscal contributions to society.
Yet we continue to have the lowest tax rate in the world.
Taxes are imposed so that roads get fixed, so we get an
education, and so people don't invade our country. Taxes are
imposed to protect our rights. The government imposes taxes
on us for our own benefit, and by raising them, we will
improve the living conditions and quality of life in America.
Tax increases will lead to economic growth and prosperity.
In 1990 and again in 1993, President Clinton enacted deficit-
reduction legislation that raised taxes for high income
taxpayers; as a result, economic growth and job creation were
strong. Within this period of a sensational economy, capital
gain rates were cut, and there was a 20% increase in job
availability for a total of 21 million new jobs. However,
after the Bush Tax Cuts of 2001 and the Bush Recession, job
growth lagged behind GDP growth, there was 0% net job growth,
and with continuous population growth, there were record high
unemployment rates. Tax increases have helped society and the
economy in the past, and they will help again.
In any case of regulatory action, the value to be upheld is
the quality of life. By reducing debt, supporting society,
and giving rise to the economy, the nation will better ensure
a standard of well-being for its citizens. The government of
these United States is to assure life, liberty, health, and
happiness, in our pursuit of the American dream. Lincoln said
it best in his Gettysburg Address: ``that government of the
people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from
the earth.'' The prioritization of tax increases over
spending cuts is essential to future policy in the United
States of America to sustain the American public.
Fiona Higgins, Champlain Valley Union High School, Grade 12 (Finalist)
There are many issues facing the United States. Personally,
I believe one of the most critical domestic issues is
reproductive rights.
Every step back to pre-Roe v. Wade is sensationalized in
the media, and rightfully so. The issue is much more far
reaching than pro-life versus pro-choice; it is both a human
rights issue and an economic issue.
Firstly, it is a human rights issue. It is a matter of
women having control over their own decisions, their bodies,
and their lives. Western women strive to liberate women who
they view as oppressed, but these same western women don't
realize that their freedoms are also disappearing. Women and
men alike have the right to decide what happens to their
bodies. Restricting access to contraception and health
services violates this human right for both genders.
Secondly, it is an economic issue. Children cost money.
When parents cannot support their family, they are prone to
apply for welfare and other government programs that were put
in place to help low-income families. These programs are
needed, but the federal government could decrease the need
and the cost of these programs if it focused on education and
access to contraception. In low-income neighborhoods, people
are often not able to access contraception. This takes
away lower-income women's autonomy as well as perpetuating
the cycle of poverty. If there were more accessible systems
in place, these systems (rather than chance) would help
families plan for the future, and allow them to decide to
have children (rather than chance). In addition, a decreased
level of government spending would curb the growth of the
debt, which would aid the struggling economy.
A woman rarely thinks to herself, ``I'd like to have an
abortion instead of using contraceptives this time.'' That is
lunatic. Abortions happen out of necessity. If they were
illegal or severely restricted, women would still get them,
but the procedures would be unsafe and deadly. If members of
Congress truly want to protect the unborn and create a
diminished welfare-dependent state, they must focus on
education and accessibility; this strategy will also lower
government spending in the long run.
Instead of going backwards, the United States should be
moving forwards. Members of Congress must recognize that
women have an inalienable right to privacy with regard to
their bodies, a right that we should not have to fight for.
Education and access to contraceptives needs to be more
widespread, thereby improving our dire economic situation and
our quality of life.
Owen Deffner, Thetford Academy, Grade 7 (Finalist)
2013, America has had quite a year, with many ups and
downs. Everything from the government shut down, to what I'd
call: an official economic recovery. We have witnessed a
terrible civil war in Syria where tremendous bloodshed has
occured. America has hosted many natural disasters too,
everything from intensely cold temperatures to violent
tornadoes. In these tragic times America has stepped up its
game and delivered, helping our neighbors when they are
struggling. This is the America that our allies look up to;
the friendly, hospitable, welcoming America that we all
contribute to every single day. Let's keep that good,
positive America in our hearts this year.
11 million people are in America illegally. These people
have come to this great nation in search of a better life.
These people are trying to achieve the American dream.
Immigrants are trying to send money home to their family in
another country, some are trying to provide for their family
here in the US. All the while they are constantly worried
that our government will deport them back to their home
country. This is not right, it's not okay that we don't
welcome them into our nation. I want the path to citizenship
easier for them so that they can get what they wanted to get
by coming here. Let's be a bit more hospitable to people who
are just trying to help their family.
Our status on the issue of the environment is not looking
up. America has the great opportunity to help lead the fight
against climate change. America must set high standards
concerning the environment so that other countries will
follow to help reduce the risk of the world's surface covered
in water. Inside America to confront this issue head on we
need to educate Americans on what is okay and not okay to
recycle and how to compost or break down food into soil for
our farms and gardens. This is a plan that will work and that
we must initiate this year.
Our country is very behind on a major issue. America's
education system is well behind many other well developed
global powers. We need to fix that issue from the bottom up
starting in our pre and elementary schools, with more
emphasis on math and science. At higher levels, more
affordable college and university opportunities for the lower
and middle-class. We need to invest more time and education
in our education and we need to now!
All of these ideas I am proposing are simple and should be
easy to carry out with a bit of willingness from both
parties. I am not asking to overhaul anything just some easy
doable requests that all of us can help to accomplish.
America should look to the future, to the next generation
growing into adulthood. Let's get back on track for these
young men and women who have high hopes for themselves and
their country.
Emily Martin, Vergennes Union High School, Grade 10 (Finalist)
The United States of America is an amazing country to call
home. However, in the modern day we as a nation face problems
that challenge our ingenuity and integrity. The world today
is one of war, whether that is physical, or political. We
struggle to find resources to continue on living the way we
have for as long as we can remember, yet forget that the
earth which we walk on is a fragile one. The United States is
no exception. We often find ourselves between a rock and a
hard place; dealing with complex issues such as health care
for all, or additional billions of dollars in debt; the
Continuation of fighting a war which is not ours, or
withdrawing our troops and allowing innocent people to face
an uncertain future. Spend billions in foreign oil to keep
companies in business, or convert to clean energy and watch
the economy crumble. The list of hard choices goes on and on.
The reality is, we no longer live in a time when decisions
are cut and dry and each decision resonates into our future
with force.
As a nation, we face an increasingly unpredictable future,
and without reassurance of our outcome, fear can cause
bitterness and ignorance. Education, the economy, politics,
and the fate of an ever-changing climate put an enormous
amount of stress on us a people. There is no certain cure for
the issues we deal with a nation, but the first step towards
solution and unification. As a country, it's time that we put
aside our grudges, opinions, and preferences and work as a
whole to support America's path towards growth, safety,
security and stability. The United States of America has been
a country that others look to as a role model and to some as
a beacon of freedom and safety. We have more than ourselves
to work for; there are millions of people around the world
who rely on our help and support. We need to shed the selfish
shells, and work as a people, not as a political party or
organization. Whether you are a Republican, Democrat, and
Libertarian it doesn't matter, because America is your home,
and at the end of the day we all have to learn to coexist and
benefit from each other's support. This is how we will help
to secure America's future, America's education, industry and
healthcare. Unification is the first step towards solution.
If we need reminding of the impact of dissention and
fracturing of our political system, the Civil War looms in
the hearts and from the pages of our history, when compromise
not only failed, but conversation stopped. The State of the
Nation in America is painful obvious even to the young people
and the children. If we don't remember how to talk to each
other, work together and accomplish the majority rule
established as a framework in the US Constitution, we stand
to lose more than a budget. We stand to lose our democracy.
Nick Majeski, Woodstock Union High School, Grade 11 (Finalist)
Bribes from Fast Food: A State of Corruption
In the year 2014, the union is majorly corrupt; the country
is run by a capitalist nightmare of over-powerful healthcare,
tobacco, and food industries. From their very beginnings at
the turn of twentieth century, the fast food industry has
steadily become more and more powerful and influential.
Spawning from this growth in influence, the union has
steadily declined into a state of corruption at the hands of
the fast industry, with these major food chains bribing
government workers in high positions.
Government agencies controlling food, such as the FDA,
USDA, and EPA may have been created with good intentions, but
when a higher up does not believe they are being paid enough
money for their job, they are known to be tempted to accept
bribes and submit to being the puppets of fast food
corporations, looking to exploit their power to lower the
standards of their products. An article on Naturalnews.com
explained how, in a survey given to workers at the FDA and
USDA, one fourth of the survey takers admitted to have
changed policies for corporate gain. On one hand this is not
morally right both in the way that our government officials--
who were elected by the people--are accepting bribes, and
also that they are changing policies allowing even less
healthy food that causes diseases--more money to health care;
another corrupt industry in the United States.
Corrupt FDA, USDA, and EPA fat-cats obviously do not want
to break their ties with fast food puppeteers; this brings
more corruption directly into the government organizations
themselves. In the Naturalnews.com article the writer
explains that many innocent workers at organizations like the
FDA and USDA are demoted or even fired for trying to do their
job and not keeping their mouths shut about corruption they
have witnessed. The higher-ups in charge of these huge
organizations influence immoral decisions that bring dirty
money to their own pockets; they change state standards to
very low standards and do not require food companies to tell
customers when the food was made, processed or cooked.
Despite all this--mostly widely known information--this
corruption is still going on and growing. According to
Fastfoodnationhonorsproject.weebly.com ties between congress
and fast food are too strong to vote against certain
policies. This means that the way to lower corruption in the
food industry would have to be to take direct action.
Despite knowledge of corruption being well known in
America- Supersize Me is a mainstream movie- there is not
very much motivation to stop bribes from the food industry.
This is a problem that should not only be addressed, but
worked towards solving as well.
Holly Thayer, Milton High School, Grade 12 (Finalist)
My fellow Americans, I stand here before you to evaluate
the state of our great nation. Over the past year our economy
has risen as the Gross National Product increased 4.1% in the
third quarter, and the National Deficit went down $1.8
Billion. As of November, the national unemployment rate has
dropped to 7% and personal income has risen, proving that our
nation is moving out of the recession, and America is once
again becoming a nation of economic growth and wealth.
2013 saw an increase in revolutions around the world, from
Syria to Egypt, many countries around the world are
experiencing the same revolution the United States and our
ancestors endured in order to gain our individual freedoms.
Through the government and all of our national forces, we
must work together to give aid in the form of resources and
money, to assist the new governments that are the result of
these revolutions, and ensure that there is smooth turn over
of
power. The United States must also create a coalition of our
allies, along with the United Nations, to create an agreement
that delegates the responsibilities and costs of helping
these nations form new governments, and ensures that the re-
created states are not intruding on an individual's human
rights.
The production of Genetically Modified Organisms, GMOs,
that are then placed in processed foods or on crops and used
as an insecticide, have created a serious health risk for
myself, and all my fellow Americans. It has been proven that
GMOs can lead to serious health issues and impose high health
risks. We must work together with the agricultural farmers
and corporations that use GMO's to research the other options
that these businesses have in order to ensure plant safety,
without endangering the public health at the same time. Then
we must create a grant program that would give states and
localities money to allocate to farmers and organizations
that agree to not use GMOs. For companies that still use
GMOs, we must toughen the regulations on the use of them,
through only allowing a regulated amount to be present in
foods, and make it mandatory that this presence is labeled on
every package of a product.
Educated masses lead to innovations and improvements in
every aspect of life. Currently, around 30% of Americans have
obtained a college degree. In order to have an educated
citizenry, we need to make federal aid for students planning
on going to college more available. To do this, we need to
restructure the system that is used to disperse federal
financial aid. If we create a formula, based on family
income, and reduce the importance and use of merit based
scholarships, while increasing the use of incentive programs,
then allocate the money based on this system, we could
effectively make financial aid more available and abundant,
and therefore increase the percentage of Americans who have a
college degree, creating an educated citizenry.
Thank you, God Bless America.
Delaney Spink, South Burlington High School, Grade 12 (Finalist)
I can't claim to know a lot about politics. In fact, I make
a point to stay as uninvolved in it as possible. In a
nutshell, all I know is that Obama is our president, and that
I should never bring up politics with my grandfather, unless
I'm willing to spend the next three or four hours listening
to him denounce every decision our government has made since
the 1920's. When our class was told we had to write this
essay, my first thought was, ``I have no idea what the state
of our union is. How am I supposed to write about how to fix
it?''
I'd bet that every single other student in my classroom was
having the same thought, save the one or two kids that are
really into politics, and, as we all know, are going to win
this competition. This got me thinking, and I've come to a
conclusion. The problem with our country is that not enough
young people know what the problem is. Ironic, isn't it?
When I think of our government, I think of old white men.
Now, I know this is a very stereotypical generalization that
I'm making. Women are getting involved, and, hey, our
president is black. We seem to be doing better, based on the
limited information that I have. But, whether they're diverse
or not, the people making decisions for our country are old.
This isn't entirely a bad thing; older people have more
experience, confidence, and knowledge. All I'm saying is that
that wisdom needs to be balanced with the fresh perspectives
of our country's younger generations. Younger people need to
start getting more excited about politics, myself included.
We need to start looking at it as an exciting opportunity to
change what we think should be changed, instead of as a
boring subject that our uncles argue about over Thanksgiving
dinner.
Now, I know there are probably many kids out there that are
interested in politics. That's great, but I also know that
the vast majority of kids, like myself, are simply
uninterested. The solution lies with us, and we need to
motivate ourselves. It can't come from the adults. If this
essay somehow makes it to anyone important, please don't take
this as a sign that you need to launch a national ``Politics
are Cool, Yo!'' campaign. It won't work. It needs to be
started by the kids. We need to start clubs, be in our school
governments, or even just watch the news.
I don't have a perfect solution, seeing as I am, for now,
one of the aforementioned uninterested students. But, I know
this: If politics can become more accessible to young people
in any way, shape, or form, we will take notice, and,
eventually, get involved. It's our country too. We want to be
just as involved as Grandpa Bill and Senator Sanders. One of
us just needs to lead the way.